Drop Dead Gorgeous: Poster

Drop Dead Gorgeous

I finally finished The Forbidden, I'm really sorry for the long wait but I finished it a month ago but reading it back I was unhappy with the result and hated the ending so I rewrote it to make it more explosive, thank you to everyone for being patient and waiting for me to post the outcome and thank you for any comments, negative or appreciative I welcome any comments.

In a previous post I wrote a blub/prologue for a story I had written down and after writing the first scenes and character introductions it's really not working for me, I'm finding myself at a loss for ideas and honestly I think the plot is kind of same-ish to another story I wrote a year ago and so I have now scrapped that idea completely, I found I did not enjoy that concept much and so I don't want to half ass it and make something I know I would be unhappy with.

I do have a new idea, however. I feel this concept is more in keeping with Stardoll and it will be easier to get participants as the casting is 80% female and the plot has elements of fashion and beauty which will hopefully get more people interested. I have a small plot out line, it's sketchy and vague but I think you will get the idea.

Summer, 2009. Ten aspiring models are all set to compete in the biggest beauty pageant in the country. But someone's competitive streak is a little too prominent. Model number eight, Maria Cole, is found murdered in her dressing room. Strangulation marks and multiple stab wounds cover her body. But the show must go on. Only one can win, and only one can survive...

The first scene is already written, I will post it tomorrow.

Ellie chocked back tears as she stood before the two monstrous men, bating her breath she sniffled, the man in the door way stood firm as the other approached her slowly, Ellie swung around as the approaching man giggled in excitement, she stared at him, his head covered by a tatty old hat, his clothing dirty and thread bear, but worst of all his face, twisted and disturbing, half of his upper lip missing, his skin looked bubbled and reddened raw, chapped skin, Ellie backed away slowly, holding out the weapon she had found she raised it further, trying to threaten the men who had surrounded her, she whimpered and sobbed as the man edged closer to her, she suddenly ran towards the door, throwing her body at the firm man, he faulted for a moment but ultimately gripped Ellie, she screamed ferociously as she tried to escape, he threw her back and she fell to the floor, opening her eyes she saw the man in the hat stood above her, she tried to move but as she did she felt a sharp pain to her head, the other man stood upon her blond hair, she struggled to move but her scalp tore, a few hairs from her head snapped from her skull and she screamed in utter pain, suddenly the man in the hat lay on top of her, his weight crippled her, she again tried to move her body away but the pain was horrific, both men laughed creepily as they tormented Ellie, she tried in vain to push the man away from her but his face grew ever closer to hers, his mouth met hers, Ellie clamped her mouth shut as he licked her lips rabidly, her eyes welled up as he violated her, laughing still the man standing oh her hair crouched down, he pinched her nose and laughed as Ellie tried to struggle away, her head bleed as further hair ripped from her scalp, anguished Ellie let out a deep breath, she could not hold herself any longer, as she opened her mouth one of the men pushed her disgusting fingers inside her mouth, his fingers fumbled with her tongue and teeth, he salivated and slobbered onto Ellie as he pushed his fingers around her mouth, suddenly she snapped her mouth shut, catching his fingers he roared in pain, blood secreted from Ellie’s mouth as she spat the end of his finger out, the other man laughed and pounded Ellie on the chest heavily, she heaved in pain, but before she could regain her breath she saw his boot falling towards her, his boot smashed heavily into her face, knocking Ellie out cold.

MEANWHILE

Alice called out for her friends, ‘DAN!’ she shouted but she knew they would not hear her above the music, she had only ventured a few yards away, but she had a bad feeling about the woods surrounding her, the fog had gotten worse and she was feeling quite frightened to be on her own. she began to retreat when she heard a rustling coming from a close by patch of bushes, she peered at it inquisitively for a second, in fear Alice backed up and began to run back to the near by gathering, suddenly out of nowhere Alice crashed into another person, both fell backwards with a huff, Alice flicked her hair back and saw familiar face, Lou was kneeling on the floor, Alice looked at her for a second and Lou started to sob, her eyes seemed empty, Alice rushed over to Lou and comforted her, suddenly once again, Mika stumbled from the tree line, her clothing being so bloodied made Alice’ jaw drop, Mika stared at Alice, Lou slowly stood up and looked at Alice, she quickly embraced her friend, hugging her with all her strength she heaved, Alice stood in total shock as Mika watched on, Lou broke away and ‘we need to get the others and go, now!’ she demanded, Alice furrowed her brow and blinked at Lou blankly, Lou gasped and held onto Alice’s hand, ‘Let’s just go and we can explain, we have to find the others, right now!’ she again demanded, Alice knew Lou, she was very placid and not easily spooked, so she followed as Lou and Mika lead her back to the thudersome party scene. As they reached the back drop a huge blast echoed in the distance, the music stopped as did the hordes of people, looking back Lou saw a large fire and billowing smoke engulfing the woodland, an explosion forced everyone to duck for cover, people could he heard screaming and crying in fright, a few people ran past the girls and as they did Mika heard them shouting worriedly about their cars, Lou broke away from Alice and followed the crowds heading towards the blast.

Running for a few minutes she was met with groups of people standing on a slight hills, looking downwards, Lou pushed her way through the people, some were audibly upset and cursing, Lou looked down to see a huge fiery pit, filled with cars, all on fire, she spied Tyler jeep and gasped, it had been moved from their parking space and was now blazing on fire, all around people were panicked, ‘how are we going to get home?’ complained one guy, his head shaved, he looked on worriedly, Lou stared at him and his friends but suddenly one of them fell abruptly to the floor, almost everyone quickly stopped talking and looked at the girl lying in the floor, the guy with the shaven head ducked down to the floor to help his friend but their was an arrow embedded in her skull, the crowd began to panic further more as girls shrieked in fright, suddenly a loud thump and commotion behind Lou made her look back and as she did blood splattered onto her face, she looked onward as people screamed and pushed past her, one of the mountain men stood meters from her, brandishing a large machete he slammed it’s thick blade into the revellers, blood sprayed into the air as he hacked at people randomly, Lou tried to move but the human traffic was struggling as many people tried to escape, suddenly she burst through a gap in the sea of people and ran into the clearing, following the crowds of people she sprinted with the crowds of scared people, many of them screaming she just kept with the majority crowd, not knowing what direction she was heading.

The darkness of the night filled the small dingy room, three unmade and uncared for beds cluttered the room joined by empty food packets and soda cans, heavy breathing the only noticeable sound, that is until in the distance there was screaming and shouting, although muffled the screams were obviously of somebody who was truly terrified. Suddenly the door burst open and moon light filled the once darkened room, a gigantic in stature man threw a person to the floor, as she hit the floor she winced and curled up into a ball, trying to protect herself as the man kicked her in the head and chest and grunted at her to shut up, quickly the man retreated from the room, only looking back inside to ignite a lantern hanging by the door, quickly the young woman tried to pick herself from the ground, she held her ribs and wined as she clutched onto a near by make shift table to aid herself to her up to her feet, it was Ellie, as she pulled herself up something fell from the table onto her, she quickly crawled to her feet and ran to the door, still clutching her ribs she pulled on the door handle, again and again, she slapped the door powerlessly and chocked back tears, she looked back into the room and could see but mere darkness, she reached up and pulled the lantern from the wall, holding it a few inches in from of her Ellie slowly walked into the room, terrified but hoping to find an escape, suddenly she reached the table and under her feet she felt something, she lowered the lantern and her eyes met with a gruesome sight, she screamed out loudly as she jumped away from the teeth under her feet, human teeth, she gagged but looked around further, the room seemed to be a bedroom and kitchen she thought as she saw the beds and a small and grotty refrigerator, again the sights she saw were unimaginable, lying on the shelving were human remains, ears, fingers and even flaps of skin were sitting atop the dirty surfaces, Ellie breathed heavily as she choked back tears of anguish, she tried to breath slowly and keep calm, she exhaled slowly but heard a louder exhausted gasp for air somewhere in the room, rattled, Ellie out stretched her arm and jolted the lantern in all directions, she swallowed hard as she tried to peer into the darkness to see the source of the gasp, Ellie took small steps further into the room, her legs trembled, she felt as though she would collapse she was petrified – she lifted the lantern into the air and slowly moved it around, suddenly a hand grasped at her wrist and a high pitched snarling sounded in her ear, Ellie quickly turned and saw a deformed man wailing at her, his eyes bloodshot, boiling in the light of the lantern, he gasped loudly and pulled Ellie sharply towards him, wrapping his foul mouth around her wrist and pushing his teeth into her flesh.

Ellie screamed so loudly, her head felt like it would explode, the pain was horrifying, she struggled with him as she felt the pain of her skin rip away from her bones, she pushed her foot against the seat and pulled away from him just as her skin tore away from her body, as she stumbled backwards she dropped the lantern onto the floor and the gasoline shattered onto the floor and the light exploded into a fire, the grotesque man screamed at Ellie as she backed away from the fire burning in front of him, she clutched her wrist as blood pumped from the wound, the fire quickly filled the room, Ellie got up and reached for the door handle, she looked back and in the fire the man sat staring at her silently, even though fire had started to creep up his legs, he was enormously fat and bloated, his skin red and sore, but his eyes pure evil, Ellie grimaced at him and pulled oven the door, the night sky shone on her face and she stepped outside, all of a sudden a metal bear trap fell from above the door way and snapped shut, Ellie tried to avoid it by dropping to the floor, she screamed as the heavy trap fell onto her, snatching a small amount of her hair in it’s spiky teeth, she struggled to get up, realizing she was trapped she tugged at her hair, snapping the hair away from her skull, she cried silently as the hair pulled away and blood dripped from her head, as she felt the relief of being free Ellie found her way to her feet and limped into the surrounding trees.

Lou ran as quick as she could holding onto the hand of the tall shaven headed man, he led her with a small group of people but the two of them has become lost, neither spoke a word but she felt quite safe with him, Lou sighed heavily, the man looked at her and stopped, ‘are you alright’ he asked, his voice deep but friendly, ‘No, no I’m really not’ said Lou nodding her head lightly, he put his hand on her shoulder reassuringly, Lou breathed heavily as she thought about her friends, the guys face looked glumly at Lou he began to speak ‘I’m To-‘ but before he could finish his words an arrow crashed neatly into the side of his head and he fell sharply to the floor, for a second Lou glazed over, his death was so quick it failed to register to her, she gasped and pushed herself against a near by tree, not knowing where the arrow had come from she panicked but held her nerves enough to creep over to fallen tree and hide beneath it’s leaf covered exterior, she peered at the guys dead body, his eyes were still open, Lou bated her breath as a man approached the body, he kicked the body quickly and laughed, for a second her fell to his knees and tied a rope around the bodies ankles, with a sharp tug the body disappeared from sight and Lou cried lightly, tears sticking to her blood stained face, she stayed on the floor for a few minutes and then dared to come out of hiding, she silently crept from tree to tree, looking out for the killer mountain men on her way, suddenly she smelt smoke fill her nostrils, she gasped and held her shirt over her face, she suppressed herself coughing and looked into the distance, a raging fire, she stopped and thought for a second and she ran towards it, maybe the fire department had been called, she quickly made her way to the inferno, suddenly out of nowhere Lou was grabbed from behind, before she could react the person hushed her by gently placing their fingers over her blood stained lips, it was Tyler, suddenly the fire near by exploded into a fireball and erupted, the explosion was loud and hurt Tyler and Lou’s ears, but they slowly approached a tree and saw the hut billowing smoke and covered with a raging fire.

The wood of the building collapsed little by little, then just as Tyler and Lou turned to leave they heard a scream, for a second they both paused, Tyler ran from the trees and saw Ellie sitting on the floor below him, maybe two miles away, there was blood pouring from her mouth as she dragged herself along the floor, she reached down to her lower leg and screamed out in agony, tugging on a large shard of glass, dislodging it from her flesh, she looked in agony. Lou held Tyler back as she knew the mountain men would surely have seen the raging fire and heard Ellie’s screams, she dug her nails into his shoulder as she saw three of the men emerge from the smoke from behind the hut, they mumbled and shouted to each other in communication until one of them saw Ellie frantically pulling herself into the shrubbery to avoid being seen, they all watched her menacingly drag herself away from them, two of them slowly approached her, making enough noise to alert Ellie to their presence, taunting her like a cat taunts a mouse. She looked back and screamed in sheer terror, she tried in vain to get to her feet but her legs were too badly injured, her terrified screams seemed to entertain the men, who by now were closer to Ellie, one brandished his dirty knife, covered in clotted blood, towards Ellie, jabbing it towards her trying to scare her further, he let out a humiliating cackle as Ellie begged for her life, he brandished the knife menacingly and thrust it close to her face, Ellie reacted by pushing him away, laughing harder the man pulled Ellie from the ground, she screamed but did not struggle, she had nothing left, suddenly with a burst of energy Ellie pushed the man away, he grabbed her wrist to stop her escape, quickly she clenched the glass from her leg in her hand and smashed the shard of glass into the mans neck, with a childish cry she let go of Ellie, stumbling to the floor she used all her might she pushed herself from the ground but as she did so the other man grabbed her by the hair and plunged a small pen knife into her arm, she dropped to the floor and cried out in agony, Tyler watched on as his girlfriend was tortured, ‘we have to help’ he said angrily, Lou quickly relented and kicked her shoes from her feet, I’ll distract them, go get her!’ she said heroically, jumping to her feet she screamed at the top of her lungs; ‘hey, motherfuc..’ as quick as she started to talk an arrow shot past Tyler and plunged into Lou’s face, the forced of the arrow threw her backwards.

Tyler watched as her limp body flew to the floor, he gasped for air and moved from his hiding spot quickly, Ellie screamed and wailed as she recognized her friends voice, ‘NO!’ she screamed repeatedly, she scrambled to her feet and tried to run but as she got to her feet she saw the man she injured swung his huge knife at her, instinctively she held her hands up in defence and the knife sliced through her skin and bone with ease, the pain was horrific as Ellie’s severed fingers dropped to the leaf covered floor, she held her hand gently as she cried and blood squirted profusely from her hand. Suddenly the man grabbed her and held her back to his chest, he held her tightly as she struggled to escape, suddenly Ellie stopped moving as the man plunged the knife into her back, she quickly spat up blood and wretched as the knife crunched and squelched, the blade severing her spine in two. He quickly dropped Ellie to the floor as she gasped for air, her breathing erratic and pained her body lay limply on the ground and her eyes seeped with tears and panic; Ellie was now disabled and helpless. The uninjured man smiled and grabbed Ellie by her blond hair and dragged her across the grassy flooring into the wild, grunting his orders at the other man, as if obeying an order he quickly trudged up the hill towards Lou and Tyler’s hiding spot, he picked up Lou’s dead body with ease and threw it over his shoulder, as the turned to leave he heard a crack, a branch snapping, he looked around for a second and began down the hill quickly, Tyler lay near by and watched the man take her away as soon as he went out of sight Tyler cautiously made his way from the area.

MEANWHILE

Alice and Mika had joined a group of people walking along the roadside, Mika was weak and could hardly walk, Alice held her up and the group of six people wandered down the dirt road, the group kept walking until they came to a huge open field filled with cars, some looked old and were rusted, others were new, as the group wandered through the wrecks Alice noticed blood over some of the cars, hand prints on the windows and clothing and items on the grassy floor, including children’s toys and baby rattles, she closed her eyes gently and thought for a second, all the cars in the surrounding must have been from victims of the mountain men, men, women and even children must have fought for their lives in these woods. Mika clung onto Alice, her cuts were weeping heavily and blood dripped from her ripped clothing, a discussion began in the group that maybe they could hot wire one of the newer cars in the yard, Mika and Alice rested on a near by car, a few of the group members searched close by cars, Alice left Mika at the car as she helped search the cars for a car which had not been wrecked, Mika stood up and looked inside the car she sat upon, she swung the door open and looked inside, rummaging in the papers and trash inside she found a lighter, pushing it into her pocket she sighed heavily and reached down to her wounded body, her cut had become numb with cold, she pushed her shirt over the cut just as Alice came back, holding a tire iron, she swung it into the air showing she could hit somebody forcefully. Just then a car started up, Mika and Alice quickly walked over, one girl seemed very jittery as they waited to get into the car, ‘We are not all going to fit in there’ said Alice, ‘we have to find another car’ said another group member, ‘No! we need to leave, now’ said the jittery girl, ignoring her everyone searched for another salvageable car, Alice and Mika helped near by, as everyone looked they did not see the panicked girl climb into the hot wired car, the engine already turned she slowly closed the car door, as she did so two others noticed and ran over, banging on the window they screamed her to stop, ‘fuck you!’ screamed the girl as she wheel spun the car, obviously in desperation she has selfishly left the others behind.

‘BITCH!’ screamed Alice kicking the floor with her sneakers, ‘what the fuck are we going to do now? As soon as those things notice her ride outta here they are going to know where we are!’ said one guy, his face filled with worry and anger. ‘We have to get another car started’ replied another person, realizing it was the only option they all began searching again, Mika kept her distance as the others searched the cars and vans strew across the field, she was hurting and even the slightest movement caused her discomfort, she mildly searched a near by car and saw pictures cluttering the back seat, she picked up a picture and studied it, her face stared back, in the picture she looked happy with a small group of her friends, she choked back tears as she held the picture happily, she swept her hair behind her ears and wiped her face quickly, in the distance she heard a rumbling sound, a slight chugging, instantly she knew it was the mountain men, she dropped the picture to the floor and shouted lightly, ‘hide, they’re here!’ she ran over to Alice and led her behind a rusty old car, she shuffled under it and bated her breath as the car drew closer, huddled with them were two other survivors, both guys and all four kept quiet as they heard the black truck came to a stop, Mika was the only person with a clear view of the truck and she watched two of the men emerge from the it, she instantly recognized one, looking quickly at the rear of the vehicle she saw the girl who had taken the car slumped in the back, her throat clearly cut open, she closed her eyes in disgust and lay in wait, the two men wandered around grunting to each other and pointing to different areas to search, one of the men grew impatient and started to slam the cars around and kick them and as her kicked the trunk of the car Mika had once drove in a small black container fell from the spare hanging on the door, Mika gasped lightly and bit her lip, the spare key was in that box, Alice slowly moved next to Mika and looked at her puzzled, ‘what?’ she asked quietly, Mika glanced at her and motioned over to the box and mouthed ‘keys’ to her, Alice looked once more at her friend and without hesitation she quickly scrambled from under the car, Mika tried to grab her to stop her but Alice was too quick, she eased up from the floor and glanced around, the men were both just over ten feet away but she knew she had to do this, she crept slowly into the clearing between the cars and ran quietly over to the box and snatched it from the floor, as she did so her jacket zipper caught the aluminium body of the car and made a slight noise, both men turned quickly but just in time Alice hid from their view to the side of the car, breathing heavily she could see them walk towards her, Mika gasped as they drew closer to the car until the reached it and looked down where Alice had hidden only to find nothing, she had quickly moved to the front of the car to avoid them, suddenly Mika realized the two guys had gone, she looked around quickly and saw them both scramble from beneath the car and make a break for the tree line but before they could make it a gun shot echoed into the darkness, and one of them fell to the floor, the other froze in terror as his friend fell to the floor dead, his leg twitching as he lay dead on the floor, one of the men grabbed him by his neck and pushed him to the floor in front of the car, Mika watched as her pushed the innocent guy to the floor, the cannibalistic man grunted as her knelt by the young guy, he glanced Mika watching but he never gave her away, he barely moved, Mika watched in horror as the evil man stuck the stem of a gun into the guys mouth fiercely and bluntly, causing him to cough and splutter, Mika could see him spit up blood and there was nothing she could do to stop it, she was powerless as he repeatedly abused the guy, suddenly as the man pulled the gun from his mouth once more and blood tripped from his lips he begged for his life, ‘Please god, he cried softly holding a cross around his neck, as he said this the man stuck the gun inside his head and emptied a bullet into his skull, his head almost exploded as blood and brain matter splashed all over Mika, she closed her eyes quickly and tried not to vomit or make any noise as the sadistic killer laughed to himself, Alice saw and gulped hard, the darkness hid the men well and unbeknown to Alice one stood behind her watching as she crouched silently on the floor, he glared down at her out stretching his arm to delicately touch her hair, so delicately she never felt his presence until he gripped her by the hair and picked her up, she screeched in agony as he threw her across the bonnet of the car.

‘Stop it’ she begged as the man slapped her harshly across the face, she fell silent for a moment, the slap knocking her senses away, she struggled with him as he pushed himself on top of her, he reached down and tried to open her jeans buttons, Alice screamed even louder and tried to escape he laughed menacingly and he tried to pull down his rank and worn trousers, suddenly he gasped for air and he let go of Alice, she scrambled away as he aimlessly shook his hands around his face, he fell to the floor with a thump and Mika was stood behind him holding the tire iron Alice had found, Alice looked at the man lying face down on the floor, blood was pumping from a large gaping wound in the back of his head, she sighed gently as she got from the bonnet of the car, before she could thank Mika somebody stumbled towards them ‘Tyler!’ said Alice running over to him, she approached him quickly and for the first time in hours he smiled as his friend came over but before she reached him he felt a sharp pain in his back, looking down he gurgled slightly as a large metal rod ripped through his skin, Alice screamed as he fell to the floor dead, behind him stood the other mountain man, his mouth upturned showing his rotten teeth, he thrust the dead body of one of the group towards Alice, his chest was open and his ribs poking through his torso, she fell to the floor with the body and screamed as he ran at her with a pick axe, he slammed it towards her head but she managed to dodge his attack, he shouted in rage as Alice got from beneath the dead body, suddenly Mika swung the tire iron at the man, the Steele pole smashed his harshly in the face and he let go of the axe, Alice watched as Mika hit him again across the face, this time he avoided her attack and kicked her in the chest, she fell to the floor and the man lunged at her, Alice quickly lumped on his back and reached her hands onto his face, she stuck her nails into his face and tore at his skin, he roared in pain and swung himself away from Mika, he grabbed Alice’ hands and pulled her away from him, gripping her shoulders he flipped her over his head and slammed her to the floor, she groaned as she lay below him, instantly she rolled away as his boot smashed the floor, he grabbed her leg and with ease threw his body across the ground, she gripped her shoulder in pain as he looked on as she tried to move.

‘Hey fuck face!’ came a voice, Mika was maybe ten feet away standing next to the mans truck, she swung the tire iron at it and smashed it’s head light, the man called out in anger, 'You are the ugliest cousin-fucker I have ever seen, you bastard!' Mika hit it again, denting the side, he ran at her and Mika knelt down on the road beside the vehicle, she thrust the tire iron into the gas tank and the fuel gushed out onto the road, the man reached her and slammed her against the truck, she flopped to the floor and tried to defend herself as he kicked her in the face, she held the tire iron out and smacked him across the legs with it, he yelled and dropped to his knees, Mika ran from him quickly and pulled the lighted from her pocket, flipping open tool she ignited the flame and threw it towards him, but, as it hit the floor the light went out, Mika gasped as the man got to his feet she looked at Alice still lying on the floor, she turned to the man just as he trust a knife deep in her gut, she exhaled sharply as he ran the blade through her skin, she managed to swing the iron into his face and he stumbled back, she held her wound as blood dripped profusely from her cut, she quickly limped over to the man and held the iron up ready to strike him, he wielded his knife and both he and Mika aimed for each other, Alice groaned and caressed her head, she saw as the man lunged at Mika, the knife embedding itself in her neck, Mika swung as he did but not at the man but the concrete road, before Alice could make out what had happened there was an almighty explosion, the truck lifted from the floor as Mika and the twisted man disappeared into the giant flames, Alice ducked behind a car as debris fell from the air, putting her dead in her hands she groaned in pain, she stood up slowly and looked at the damage, the fire was so intense there was no way either the man or Mika has survived.

Sadly Alice hobbled away, she wiped a solitary tear from her eye and she walked into the road, she never thought or looked anywhere but ahead and for hours she walked into the night she saw the sign she has saw Dan looking for the night before, ‘Bitter Creek Mountain’ she said to herself as she picked up the pace, the freeway must be just a mile or so away she guessed, suddenly she heard a noise and she stopped dead in her tracks, she peered into the dense trees and walked slowly away, suddenly she heard a blood curdling laugh and trees moving, Alice ran quickly but before she could reach the sign by the road she tripped, screaming she tried to get to her feet but before she had the chance she got pulled into the darkness of the trees, screaming her last...

Change Of Heart

Hey guys, after my last blog message I carried on writing the final chapter of The Forbidden and it really re-awaked my love for horror and writing brutal stories and for that reason alone I can't leave, I wish I could just step down but it's really harder than I thought and so here is my concept for my newest story which does not have a snappy title yet (I'm open to suggestions) but does have a potential cast list, feel free to put your name down for a role.

Sam and his family have just moved from Las Vegas to a long deserted farm in rural Kansas due to the economic crisis, which forced them to give up their home in the big city. While his parents take the only car back to Las Vagas to retrieve more of their belongings Sam throws a house-warming party with his newly acquired 'friends'. However, someone without an invitation has decided to crash. The power is cut, Sam and his friends find themselves without a phone, light, or a car. Stuck on a farm hundreds of miles from help. Are they the potential victims of the same killer who slaughtered an entire family in the house 4 years earlier?

The characters are as follows, all are early concepts and their personalities and looks can and most likely will change, possibly to fit in with whoever takes the role. The names will change to also coincide with who takes the role.

Sam - Young and naive, he is easily lead by the older members of the group but gets jittery very easily, he is unaware of the previous slaughter that took place in his new farm house.

Jack - A nice guy who instantly befriends Sam, no questions asked, he is pretty goofy and fun loving which makes him a butt of the jokes the more popular gang make.

Mindy - A fun loving party girl who would attend the opening of an envelope in her Prada heels and clutching the seasons must have bag, she's dizzy and easily spooked but she's a good friend and ally to have. She takes pity on Sam and Jack at the hands of her bullying boyfriend.

Cameron - The sarcastic jock who thinks nothing of making fun of others, he thinks of nobody but himself and his enjoyment, which is often at the expense of Cloee and Jack. Is dating, Mindy.

Cloee - The emo of the group, she's reluctant to attend the party but joins the clan after befriending Sam, Cloee is sceptical about most things and is quick to see the worst in a situation, she is aware of the history of the farm house.

Colby - Cloee's hardcore boyfriend, he is unfriendly and rowdy his attitude stinks and he openly cheats on his poor girlfriend but he is really strong and ready for a fight, unfortunately he usually starts them!

Melody - Uber-bitch and a half, she only tags along because of Cameron and Mindy, she's got no interest in befriending Sam or his friends and she would save her own ass over anyone, her disloyalty to Mindy is proved as she constantly hits on Cameron.

Megan - Jacks little sister who tags along even though Jack tells her not to, she makes her appearance after the lights go out and she makes a grisly discovery in the corn field.

An Apology

Hey one and all, this is just a quick post to thank anyone who has supported my writing, it's been fun and trying and I am happy that I made some really good friends along the way, I am currently writing the final part of The Forbidden which will be crazy, I promise, lots of chases and gore.

Back to the point of this post, The Forbidden will actually be my last story here unfortunately, to be honest I have had a pretty bad time in my life recently and I don't have as much free time as I used to, I wish I could find the time because I really enjoy horror and I think it was a nice idea to incorporate Stardoll into a horror setting. Even if I do say so myself. :P

This is not the end though, I will still write short stories here and there but future projects like frostBITE and the sequel to The Forbidden are cancelled, I am really sorry to anyone who I promised parts to, I am happy to say the short I promised about Internet stalking is still going ahead, I have partially written it so I will finish it.

Again, I am sorry if anyone is upset at this, It's not an easy decision but it's something I can not commit to any longer, although I wish I could.

Ellie and Tyler pushed their way through the intoxicated crowds of people, the mass of people seemed to have broken away now, Ellie could see people in the tree line in groups, people vomiting and a general disarray of activity, she held tightly to Alice’ hand as Tyler led them to the opposite end of the clearing, farthest away from the speakers pumping out the music so ferociously, suddenly Ellie felt her grasp lost and Alice was nowhere to be seen, she tried to look back but there were too many people, she stopped for a second and tried to glimpse her friend but she could not see her, not at all. She turned back and hoped to see Tyler but he was also out of sight, Ellie smacked her forehead and pushed her hair from her eyes, she stood crowded by people and looked around, pushing past people she struggled to pull herself past the bodies, the people still dancing and enjoying their selves, she ignored peoples annoyance as she pushed between couples and groups of people, suddenly Tyler grabbed her arm and pulled her close to him, her eyes met his and she felt amazingly safe with him, she rested her hand upon his shoulder and allowed him to pull her safely behind one of the cars surrounding the area, Tyler glanced back into the crowd, ‘where’d Alice go?’ he asked staring worriedly at Ellie.

Alice stumbled past a group of heavily drunk people, her converse sneakers made a crunching sound as she lost her footing upon stepping on a beer can, she caught herself before falling and held a tight grip upon the tree which saved her fall, she looked into the dense crowd for Ellie and Tyler, or even Dee and Mario but as with Ellie the crowd was still heavy and she could not see one recognisable face amongst the people, she sighed heavily and stepped over a drunk person sleeping off their skin full, she stepped into the woodland beyond and looked into the now misted surrounding, she peered and strained her eyes as she saw somebody stumbling around in the distance, unbeknownst to her on the tree she had just rested on their was a bloody arrow embedded in the tree and the person ‘sleeping’ was actually lying in a pool of their own blood, their dead body was assumed to be a drunk passed out, Alice folded her arms and kept her eyes on the person in the distance, she took a few more steps into the woods and suddenly hands wrapped around her, she pulled away with a mighty gasp to see an over-weight guy looking at her, his eyes lazy from intoxication, he leached towards her, Alice pushed him away from her and walked back into the crowds of people, ‘oh come on, bitch’ shouted the guy, extending his arm to call out to Alice, suddenly he fell to the floor with a painful shout, he lay on his front, a huge pick axe embedded in his back, from the trees one of the men who killed Dan pulled at the weapon, with a mighty pull the implement slid from his back, warm air rose from his wound as his spine snapped and strained, the man held the pick to his face and ran his tongue across the bloodied weapon, his tongue stained with blood he swallowed heartily and bared his teeth before retreating back into the dense tree line.

MEANWHILE

Anthony and Lou struggle to pull the girl along with them, Anthony held her up as her feet dragged along the floor, all her weight rested on his and Lou, suddenly Anthony stopped and pushed the girl away with a huff, Lou unbalanced herself and struggled to hold her up, the girl was exhausted, her breathing weak, shallow and quite worrying to Lou, Lou looked sharply at Anthony ‘what are you doing?’ she demanded trying to keep hold of the poor girl, who’s body was cold and bloodied, ‘I’m fucking tired!’ he shouted glaring momentarily at Lou, she steadily helped the girl over to a near by fallen log and sat her down, Lou glanced at Anthony angrily and stomped over to him, leaning over him she scowled, ‘what the fuck is your problem?, she’s hurt, we need to get her back to the party, they will have supplies and more importantly a fucking car to get the hell out of here!’ said Lou trying to not let the girl hear, before Anthony could answer he looked over Lou’s shoulder and at the girl, her hair and face were dirty and her clothes ripped and heavily stained with blood, she looked up at him, her eyes seemed hollow and her face blank, she looked away from his glare and he turned back to Lou, her eye brows arched in anger she shook her head, ‘you are nothing short of selfish’ she concluded resting her hands upon her slender hips, Anthony looked down and mumbled ‘we don’t even know her’ he said, ‘she’s a person, she’s hurt and I’m going to help her, she needs out help, Anthony’ said Lou backing away from him, as she turned around the mysterious girl stood up, her arms folded keeping herself warm, she gulped and raised her head to look at Anthony and Lou, ‘I’m Mika’ she said meekly, hardly projecting her voice at all, Lou watched as she pulled her ripped shirt up baring her torso, Lou gasped as the girl revealed a large cut into her side, ‘they took it’ said the Mika, tenderly touching her horrific wound, it was deeply cut and the edges rough, the flesh was hanging off and blood dripping from it, ‘who took it?’ asked Anthony, Mika looked at him and pushed her shirt back over herself slowly, ‘them, the people who live in these woods – they took my friends and they killed them’ she sobbed, strings of tears thundered down her cheek, she sniffled and shook her head, ‘they ate them, they ate me!’ she said motioning to her wound again, Lou held her hand over her mouth as Mika explained, her voice trembled ‘they are vicious, they took my friends one by one and they cut them into pieces in front of me, they ate them, I watched them eat my best friend!’ she said raising her voice, ‘I’m so sorry’ said Lou approaching the girl and soothing her back, the girl sobbed lightly as Lou gently hugged her, ‘this is crazy’ said Anthony loudly, he held his hands together and watched as Lou and Mika embraced.

‘We need to get out of here!’ said Anthony but just as he said it and caught Lou and Mika’s attention a huge axe embedded into his head with a squelch, blood pumped from his head and his body convulsed, Lou screamed loudly and Mika pulled away from her, they both watched as the man standing behind Anthony pulled the axe from his head, as he did Anthony’s head fell into two half’s, his once face was unrecognizable as his body crashed to the dirt floor, Mika tugged at Lou and they both ran as quickly as they could, looking back Mika could not see the man, only Anthony’s half headless body in the distance, Lou struggled to keep us as Mika sprinted into the woods further but she never let go, she kept hold of Lou’s hand and gallantly pulled her along, her long blonde hair danced in the wind as she ran behind Mika, suddenly Mika pulled Lou behind a tree and she quickly controlled her breath, Lou coped her quickly as they crouched behind the large tree, suddenly the killer ran into the clearing, brandishing the large axe he had mutilated Anthony with, his breaths short he glanced around quickly looking for the girls, he snarled and ran forward deeper into the wood, Lou let out a heavy breath and fell onto her back, she cradled her head in her hands, Mika ignored her and kept looking around, she had seen them hunt, knew their tactics, and sure enough into he clearing another man leered, with a slight limp he sniffed the air and followed where the other deformed man has gone, he was uglier than the man before him, his hair lank and grey, his skin hanging down over his face, Lou peered from behind the tree and watched him fade into the tree line, sighing Mika regain her balanced and pulled Lou to her feet, ‘we need to get to that party’ said Mika slowly walking across the clearing following Lou.

MEANWHILE

Ellie and Tyler were still searching for Alice, they held hands tightly as they made their way through the crowds of people, ‘You know what?’ shouted Ellie, ‘she’s probably with Dan and Lou!’ she shouted over the music, ‘yeah, I guess’ replied Tyler obviously worried about his friends, Ellie smiled at him and pulled him along after her, walking into a clearing she holds Tyler’s hand to her heart and took a deep breath, he smiled at her and laughed, ‘what’s up?’ he asked, running his fingers delicately through her hair. Ellie closed her eyes and sighed, ‘I don’t want you to worry, Tyler, I could be wrong and I know I should be upset but I can’t be because I love you, always will, I hope you don’t get mad or freak out’ Tyler waited on her words, the music of the party drowned out, he waited as she paused, ‘I think, I might be pregnant’ she said, looking straight to Tyler awaiting his reaction, he looked at her for a second and smiled, he hugged Ellie tightly and kissed her on her forehead, ‘you’re not mad?’ she questioned, ‘hey, if you are we can deal with this, I love you and yeah, I guess it’s crazy but I want to spend the rest of my life with you, I love you and I’ll love this baby’ Tyler said, with a sweet smile, Ellie laughed cautiously, Tyler was happy? She could not understand it but she felt the same way, ‘I love you too!’ she cried, standing on her tip toes and kissing him on the lips, for a second the world totally revolved around them, this was bliss.

Out of nowhere Tyler is ripped from Ellie’s arms, falling to the ground she screamed as Tyler fell down a steep hill, crashing into frees and foliage she could hear him shout and wince in pain, ‘TYLER!’ she screamed looking into the misty darkness, she could faintly see Tyler lying at the bottom, she scrambled to her feet but upon looking around she saw two of the deformed men watching her contently, she starred at them back and two and tried to catch her breath, suddenly one laughed at her, Ellie jumped in fright as he cackled and whooped out loud, Ellie slowly walked away, her shoes digging into the soft dirt, the men watched her, both exchanging glances as Ellie looked on, petrified, they were grotesque but there was nowhere to run, nobody would hear her scream, suddenly Ellie took a chance and darted trough the trees, one of the men griped at her arm and tried to pull her back, she faulted and fell to the floor, she screamed as she fell, the man held tightly to her arm and gripped her by her hair, the other watched on, clapping his hands together in glee, Ellie gritted her teeth as the man pulled her from the ground by her hair, screaming at the top of her voice she slapped at the mans arm, struggling to have him release his grasp, she suddenly pulled herself towards him and bit at his disfigured hand, drawing blood he let go and Ellie fell backwards, she ran forward to see yet another man, disfigured and twisted, her let out a scream and Ellie again stopped, darting to her right she pushed past branches and made her way into a clearing, she stared at a tall building in the distance, she quickly ran toward it and opened the heavy door.

Ellie slipped inside and pushed the heavy door shut, she looked around, behind her was amass of cars, all makes and models – she stared at them and his behind a large desk, suddenly she heard the door forced open, it’s hinges creaked as the door opened fully, moonlight flooded in, Ellie grasped her hand over her mouth and kept quiet, she could hear the men speak to each other, their voices raspy ‘we will go south, you search here if you think she is here’ suddenly the door slammed shut and Ellie froze, she could see the tallest of the man limbering around the floor space, looking all over for her, she kept still and waited as he passed her and walked between the cars, Ellie slid from beneath the table and slowly crawled over to the door, reaching for the handle she turned the knob but it was stuck tight, she tried once more and crouched in silence, she slowly wade her way to another door to her right and she stood up, the door was wooden and warn, the glass panel seemed dirty, Ellie pulled the handled delicately but it was also locked, suddenly as she walked away the mans frightful face appeared at the window, his teeth bared like a dog he looked into the distance, Ellie stood to the side and waited for him to disappear, as he did watched him exit the door the other side, he walked away and Ellie sneaked along the passage way, she opened the door and quickly closed it behind her, pulling the locking mechanism shut she ducked out of the sight of the window and slowly turned around, she gasped in shock, hanging up from the ceiling were 10 or more dead bodies, in various states of undress and pools of blood beneath them, some had their chest ripped open and organs hanging from them, she wretched at the sight, suddenly she noticed a face, Dan’s corpse hung by it’s heels, his naked torso hollowed out, his skin from his arms was missing to the bone, Ellie wailed quietly at the sight, her friend was now nothing but a meal, suddenly the door handle strained, Ellie ran for cover as the man entered the door, sniffing the air he growled and huffed, he swung open doors to lockers in the room, searching for Ellie, suddenly he swung open a locker and Ellie darted out, knocking him to the ground, she smashed the heel of her shoe into his face wildly, over and over again, the man heaved her off after a few seconds, stumbling around he shouted in pain, Ellie looked at he walked around, she saw her heel imbedded in his eyes socket, she heaved as he pulled the shoe from his eye, it was embedded deeply, blood spat from his eye, Ellie looked on, suddenly behind her some large garage type doors swung upwards, the other two men stood menacingly, Ellie quickly ran to the door and tried to pull it open, she held her breath as it rattled, it was locked! Ellie grabbed a metal implement from a near by desk and smashed it trough the window, she could see the two men outside scrambling with keys at a lock fencing them outside, she struggled to get trough the small window, ripping her skirt, as she almost got out she felt herself being forced back, she kicked her feet and fell from the door, the man with the wounded eye grunted heavily and looked through the smashed panel, as he did Ellie plunged the sharp knife she broke the window with into the top of his head, he gasped lightly and his face strained, Ellie wriggled the knife inside his skull, forcing it inside, the mans body fell limp and fell backwards into the room, Ellie managed to pull the knife out of his head and she ran deeper into the field of cars, ducking behind one she gripped the long knife and slid underneath the car. she could hear footsteps and talking, she shifted herself so she could see the door so she could make her escape, Ellie saw one of the men, he sneaked past, his foot steps light, Ellie waited for him to pass, she wriggled from beneath the car and looked around curiously, she looked over at the dead body of the man she had managed to kill, blood surrounded his corpse, Ellie hurried along the hallway, almost upon her escape Ellie was confronted by one of the men, her lunged at her baring an bloodied axe, Ellie screamed and tried to run but she saw no escape, as the other man lumbered into the hallway, he snarled at Ellie and approached her…

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TO BE CONTINUED

(Special thanks to snapple2 for her contribution to the story, I can't tell you how much I appreciated your input and help.)

The Forbidden Part III

Alice stared vacantly into the crowds of people, she rolled her eyes and breathed heavily, a small eruption of warm air caused a cloud to emerge from her mouth, she pulled her jacket tightly around herself and jumped from the car hood she had been sitting on, she quickly pushed her bangs to the side of her face and slowly walked into the crowd, seeing Tyler alone she made her way to him, she tenderly touched his shoulder and he turned to her, with a heavy smile, Alice pulled him from the crowd behind some trees, as she did so Tyler stumbled to follow, the crowd was busy and bustling – ‘Have you seen the others?’ asked Alice, Tyler nodded his head and swigged from a can of red bull, ‘Mario is with some people from his old school’ said Tyler, motioning over to a group of guys, mostly jocks, all laughing and pointing out girls they found attractive, ‘Lou and Anthony have gone to move the car’ said Tyler and then he shrugged ‘Ellie and Dee went off somewhere a little while ago and fuck knows where Dan is’ explained Tyler staring past Alice and to the party scene, Tyler pushed past her and rejoined the fun, Alice sighed heavily and pushed back the trees, she also made her way in to the crowd.

‘You have to say something’ said Dee, she and Ellie were sitting alone beside a small boxed off toilet, ‘It’s not even sure yet, I’m just…worried’ said Ellie weakly smiling at her friend, ‘babe, Tyler needs to know, you could be carrying his kid’ said Dee looking worriedly at Ellie, who looked unhappy, she gently played with her bag, picking at the stitched Chanel symbol, Dee pulled the bag from Ellie and hugged her, Ellie gasped back, she spluttered and began to cry, ‘I’m pregnant!’ she exclaimed as Dee held her tightly, ‘I have to face it, I’m over 3 weeks late, I’m fucking pregnant!’ she said raising her voice and choking back tears, suddenly Alice turned the corner, Ellie let go of Dee and quickly wiped a stray tear from her face, she looked down trying to disguise her upset, Dee held onto her hand as Alice looked on puzzled, ‘what’s up?’ said Dee, smiling at Alice, ‘is everything okay?’ asked Alice, noticing Ellie choking back attempting to stop herself crying –‘fine’ said Ellie abruptly standing up, ‘lets go’ she said pulling Dee up from the wooden log they had been sitting on, Ellie grabbed Alice also and pulled her along, the music was louder now and the people drunk and rowdy, ‘Hell yeeeaaahhhhh!’ screamed Ellie dancing along to the beat, Dee and Alice followed her lead and began getting into the rhythm.

Lou and Anthony headed to Tyler’s jeep, both laughing they pushed through the sea of parked and abandoned vehicles, Lou pushed the key into the lock and pulled open the door, Anthony leaned on a near by car and watched as Lou turned the ignition, the car did not flicked, nothing at all. Lou tried again and again, she looked as Anthony stared at her, ‘it’s dead’ she said getting out of the car, she closed her door slowly and approached the hood, she searched the fender for the release catch, but Anthony noticed it was already in latched, he slowly picked up the body work and unveiled the engine and parts, a stem of heat blasted from the car, Lou and Anthony backed away to allow the severe heat to rise, suddenly Lou fell backwards, she screamed as she fell hard onto her back, Anthony tried to catch her but to no avail, she hit the floor and groaned, ‘shit’ said Anthony staring at her, Lou struggled to pull herself up, Anthony helped and she managed to find her feet, she knew immediately she was covered in something, something dark and sticky, Anthony inspected her and gasped, he held his hand over his mouth and wretched, Lou followed his eyes, in the car the engine was trashed and upon the bare motor was red blood and entrails, shreds of flesh – Lou looked at the floor and then remembered she had fallen, she ripped off her coat and threw it to the floor, she looked on as Anthony stood aback, his face was white as a ghost, he looked in utter shock, Lou looked at her hands, they were covered in the blood and clotted blood, she panicked and tried to wipe it off her skin, she breathed heavily and began to hyper ventilate as the blood tricked from her arms, suddenly Anthony walked to her, taking off his hoodie he wiped the blood from his friends hair, her blonde locks were now stained a horrific red, not a word exchanged between the two, they were both too shocked to speak and take in what they had found, suddenly Lou gasped, her mind seemed to be unclouded instantly, ‘oh my god’ she said stopping cleaning herself, Anthony abruptly halted as Lou turned to him, ‘we need my cell phone’ she exclaimed, Anthony quickly turned to the floor and picked up her blood soaked coat and as he did his noticed an arm sitting beside the car, attached was a person, their face was unrecognisable, the skin was all but gone and tissue and muscle remain, Anthony looked at the person vacantly, he dropped Lou’s coat, Lou followed him and saw the person also, she let out a blood curdling scream and doubled over, straining her voice she screamed, the person was in such a mess, neither of the friends could take it in, suddenly Anthony pointed to her body, ‘it’s the guy who greeted us’ he said, his voice trembling, Lou stared on, just then somebody tackled Anthony to her floor, he immediately crumbled to the ground, Lou watched on as the bloodied person rolled off of Anthony, he held his head and groaned, Lou’s eyes befell upon the two lying next to each other, the attackers face was covered with dirty, blood soaked hair, Lou pushed herself into the car and closed the door, she peered through the window as the other person unsteadily tried to regain their balance, turning to the car and Lou the person fell onto the window their bloody hand print leaving a smear on the glass, Lou waited in bated breath as the person stared at her, their eyes seemed full of fear, their dirty face had clear water marks in conjunction with ear streams, the person stared at Lou, their chin trembling – ‘help me’ said the person softly, their voice breaking, Lou’s faced dropped, she slowly opened the car door and ran round to Anthony, he was still on the floor, she held him and tried to help him up, he groaned heavily and rubbed his head, they both turned to the girl leaning against the car, her face crippled and bloody, she held her hand out, her arms were cut and hands bloodied, ‘please, please – help me’ she begged as Lou and Anthony watched her cry, beg them to help, Anthony pulled away and gently touched the girls shoulder, she was freezing, ‘what happened?’ said Lou staring at the clearly broken girl, ‘they’re coming, we have to go now, please’ begged the girl grabbing Anthony’s hard tightly, she and Anthony were both shaking, their were terrified, the girl choked back and caught her breath. ‘Who?’ asked Anthony holding onto the girls hand, ‘they’re strong, they fucking killed them, killed my friends’ she exclaimed, bursting into tears, Lou cleared her throat as Anthony and her pulled the girl to her feet, she could barley walk, her body seemed so frail and weak, they each took her arm and held her up, as they make their way back to the thunderous music.

Tyler looked on at his girlfriend dancing, balancing a beer bottle in his palm scratched his chin, his stubble tickled his hand, the put his bottle on a close by beer stand and made his way over to her, she pulled Alice around in a circle and danced around, Tyler knew something was wrong, Usually he and Ellie were inseparable – barely leaving each others side, suddenly Tyler walked into Mario, Mario laughed as Tyler stared at him, Mario was clearly drunk and probably obnoxious by now, he smiled at Tyler and followed his eye line over his shoulder to Ellie, he raised his beer can and laughed once again, ‘DEE!’ he shouted, Ellie and Alice turned to see Mario stomping his way over Dee, she folded her arms as Ellie joined her side, ‘what the fuck, Tyler!’ she shouted over the music, ‘me?’ said Tyler, shocked by Dee blaming him, ‘you promised me you would stop him getting shit faced’ she screamed shaking her head, ‘you can’t blame Tyler’ interjected Alice peering at Dee, Dee looked around and narrowed her eyes, ‘who asked you, bitch?’ she cured, scowling at Alice, ‘he’s your boyfriend, Dee, you should be looking out for him, no. Actually he should be taking care of himself for gods sake’ shouted Alice, Mario laughed and danced as they girls argued back and two, ‘girl fight!’ he shouted loudly, Ellie pushed herself between Alice and Dee, ‘stop’ she pleaded but they were both angry, ‘nobody wanted you here, Alice’ screamed Dee, trying to offend Alice, ‘and now who do they not want here? Huh?’ shouted Alice back quickly; Ellie pulled Alice away, followed by Tyler. Dee stomped away in the opposite direction, briskly followed by Mario stumbling behind her.

Dee held her face in her hands as Mario wretched and vomited behind a near by tree, she looked up and saw the lights from the party in the distance, the music was faint and drowned out by Mario being sick, Dee groaned and stood up, she walked over to Mario and soothed his back, he gulped back heavily and stood up, his face was sweaty and glowing in the faint light, ‘lets get you back’ said Dee, tugging on Mario’s shirt, he stood strong and pulled Dee into his arms, he puckered his lips and tried to kiss Dee but she broke away from his grip and wagged her finger in his face, ‘don’t even Mario, I am not kissing you looking like shit’ she exclaimed smirking at him, she again pulled at his arm and he reluctantly followed, ‘babe, I’m going to spill’ groaned Mario pausing on the spot, he quickly bent down into some bushes and wretched again, Dee pulled out her cell phone and slipped it open, she pressed some digits but got a no signal announcement as she tried to phone Ellie, she slowly walked farther on as she tried to get a signal, Mario could still be heard in the background, Dee slammed her phone shut and looked back, she was taken aback to see Mario kneeling on the floor, his eyes staring at her frantically as a man stood over him, his hands powering down on Mario, his arms forcing Mario to stay kneeling down, Mario held out his hands towards Dee, her mouth dropped open as the ugly man looked at her, his face was deformed and white, Mario moaned as the man put his hands inside his mouth, he struggled as Dee froze to the spot, she watched in horror as the man pulled opposite ways on Mario, his jaw strained as he let out a muffled, but terrified shout, Dee heard a cracking sound and saw blood explode from Mario, to her horror the man was ripping off his jaw, his face ripped in two halves as he tried to shout, the skin around his mouth stretched and ripped open, blood gushed from his mouth as the man ripped and shook at Mario’s now broken jaw, his body fell limp as the man pulled a knife from his pocket, he pulled the sharp edge across the skin holding Mario’s face together and his jaw dropped to the floor with a thud, Dee’s whole body shook, she wanted to scream but she just gurgled, her throat closed as she tried to shout, say anything – suddenly the mans attention returned to Dee, she dropped her phone to the floor and stared into the mans eyes, his face repulsed her, suddenly the man ran at her, his arms out reached, Dee quickly darted to the left out of the mans reach, he fell to the floor, dirty filled the air from the ground as the man skidded to a halt, Dee quickly ran from him, she ran as quickly as she could, her heels digging into the ground every step she took, she gazed at the lights in the sky, she headed for them, knowing her only safety was with the other revellers, she quickly looked back to see the killer a few feet behind her, his breathing erratic, he snorted and wheezed as he tried to catch Dee, she screamed loudly and began to panic, she finally realized what had just happened, Mari was dead, mutilated by this mutant now chasing her, she tried to pick up speed as he ran through the woods, tree braches ripped at her skin and clothes, Dee screamed again, desperate for somebody to hear her, suddenly she turned back again and the man was gone, she carried on running, her feet ached but the music was loud now, she must be close, all of a sudden Dee tripped, her legs left the floor and she fell hard to the floor, her face grimaced in pain, she stared and saw a trip wire across the clearing, she dug her elbows into the ground and pulled herself forward, suddenly she felt a coldness grip her left ankle, she peered back to see another man, pulling on her leg, his hands were webbed and foul looking, his nails long and in growing, Dee let out a scream as a tear rolled down her cheek, she tried to pull herself away, digging her long nails into the ground she held on, the man pulled ferociously on her ankle and her nails snapped, letting out another scream the man pulled her away into the darkness, Dee carried on screaming for her life and the man laughed to himself, out of sight a loud slashing sound lightly echoed, Dee’s lifeless body fell into the clearing, her chest slashed open, her eyes still open and breathing faint, Dee gasped and looked at the bath, the music was loud and close, she was but yards away, the two men who attacked her surrounded her and plunged their hands into her open chest, their fingers ripped at her insides, she could see them pull her inside out, taking her last breath her head slumped on it’s side, a small trickle of blood seeped from her mouth as the men bit and tore at her innards.